hoobastank sp update

scene 10
-camera zoome up over the hood of the sedan, into the windshield, into the singing boy
-boy has small black hair, a goiatee, a black tee
-adjusts the mirror and looks at it, actually seeing the scene behind him, starts doing this as the camera is half way over the hood
-people rush towards the fallen girl behind the car while this is happening...

scene10
-people are surrounding the girl, boy gets out of the car and goes to the crowd
-the car is in the foreground, atleast threefourths of it in the bottom left corner
-the street is in the background, with a lampost, a white box, and the dustbin from before
-optional - the scene cntains prominantly, a black womanin a yellow windcheater, a punk with half-sleeves and long hair, a woman with a grey pullover and a green cap, the white shopkeeper with white hair, and a while full - arm silk shirt, a man with a moustache and long hair looking like dutch, amd a businesswoman with short hair


scene 11
girl with long hair, dark eyes and round face turns her head in wonder,
-background is not the hotel, not the shop, but some other building with an open black entrance, three punks are standing in front off it
not important, but one guy with a red fullarm shirt is smoking in the left corner, a black guy with a green sweater and crutches is sitting next too him, three punks are standing in the doorway

scene 12
-boy walks and nods, as camera goes from the back of the boy to the top view of the crowd looking at the girl


scene 13
zooms out from the boy, from in front. camera is in the middle of the circle of people
two office buildings are in the background, in perspective

scene 14
-white shopkeeper man talks on his mobile
-background is a building with a victorian looking window prominantly in the middle. Window has shutters half pulled down.
-blonde girl with long hair touches them and looks confused in front of the man, another girl is to his right, but only the hair is seen

scene 15
camera moves further away from the boy as in scene 13

scene 16
-camera moves further away from above the crowd as in scene 12, and turns around]

scene 17
the turning movement of the camera is conintued, as the girl and the boy are smiling to each other, lying down, with their feet in opposite directions. Only the heads are seen, the lighting is yellowish

scene 18
a brown pillar, a winding staircase, and the balcony on top is seen
-boy in forground plays the guitar. Boy with small hari that is.

scene 19
-black background
-girl is walking purposefully

scene 20
blue shoes of the girl is seen, as her feet walk along the footpath

scene 21
-cars cross in front of her as she prepares to cross
(is this a mistake?) I think so

scene 22
-camera zooms in on boy with punk-white hair in front of the shop as in scene 4, same blonde and brunette walk by. Actually same scene

scene 23
-same as scene 5

scene 24
-Girl steps down from the footpath
-only the feet are seen-buildings in background, in perspective
- wad of gum is seen stuck agains the footpath

scene 25
-slightly skewd top view of girl crossing and car approaching.
-girl seems unaware of car coming
(another mistake)
Or a very clever scene, as the girl knows the car is coming. but there should be SOME reaction....

scene 26
-zoom in on shopkeeper, removing his specs
-background has pieces of complicated equipment. Will do that by capturing the scene and using a few photoshop fx

scene 27
-shopkeeper walks out of shope, with the left hand corner of lucky 110 loans shown
-boy in foreground
-camera follows him, as he enters the shop as the shopkeeper leaves

will stop here because I have just realised that this video is too serious to be made fun of. cant make it into sn sp animation. All efforts so far have been wasted. Ah well...
who cares?